Cut and come again cake

I baked this last Tuesday as we were going to a meeting, and a meeting can always be improved with cake!
I had quite high hopes for it as my mum had baked it previously and said it was delicious. Mine turned out ok, but it was rather dry. The flavour was good, but it was rather crumbly. If I made it again, I would probably cook it for less time.
It scored 7.5